Monday, April 20, 2009

poetry writing challenge - day 20


write a poem about rebirth.


phoenix

i will fail here
and I will fail now
i cannot rise from the ash.
i have ash in my mouth.
ash dust in my bed.
i touch my face and paint
myself in ash.
there is no flame from which to rise.

tomorrow, maybe, the sun will set me afire
and ablaze
i will look down

trembling

transformed

4 comments:

Beilezebub said...

Tomorrow is always and will be different.

sleepy time.

Laura Hohlwein said...

yeah.
i just wasn't feeling this one...

Laura Hohlwein said...

nor did i wake up a phoenix.
just buzzed from too many weird dreams.

Beilezebub said...

and, unfortunately this poetry business is limiting your dream postings. Not that I'm complaining at all. Home stretch and this month only has 30 days total.