Friday, October 9, 2009

painting: needs a name, please

14 comments:

goldi159 said...

"A vision is a burden" was my first title afer a couple of seconds.

Laura Hohlwein said...

interesting.
thanks.
and zebub? - ...more banana cream pie?

Beilezebub said...

Wow, I was looking at it while you posted. I was thinking "Berlin Afternoon."

Laura Hohlwein said...

okay, how about "A Pie in the Face One Afternoon in Berlin made My Vision a Burden'.
? something like that?

...or maybe I'll keep working on it.
Thank you, Readers.

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salamor said...
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salamor said...

Dear Laura,

It is clear that your work draws its energy from life, deeply felt. In your dynamic fields of color and light, we see isolated elements mingle, partner, and resolve into rhyme. Presenting the unscripted, improvisational character of direct experience as a dance between matter and spirit, your paintings point to the universal in the personal, the being in the becoming, the divine intercourse of chaos and cosmos. For me, ultimately, your canvasses resonate as dialogues between what ought to have been, and what still might be…

As to the titles of your paintings, I see you generally relying on hint and suggestion rather than explicit description; the resulting tiles multiply their own meaning, and enlarge your work.

With the above in mind, I humbly offer the following titles for your consideration, hoping that they capture at least some of the objectives of your program:

• Identity in Search of its Owner
• Descending, I Rise

I wish you great success, Laura … and hope that my offerings answer your need.


PS: Sorry about the deleted comments... my first blog!

Laura Hohlwein said...

wow.
thank you!!

if all that comes across, i might actually be succeeding in conveying what I most dearly hope to convey/explore... yes... what you said. precisely.

hmm.
do I know you salamor?

Laura Hohlwein said...

seriously, salamor...
who are ya?
hints?

salamor said...

Yes, Laura, you know me ... in a way. And I, you, in a way. You know the man I used to be, many, many years ago. While I, on the other hand, know the gifted woman that you are today ... as far as I am able to “read” you through your work ... which you say I understand “precisely.” Because your work is so intimately bound to your soul, being, again and again, both the soil that nourishes it, and the fruit that it yields, I consider this a good start ...

Perhaps fate will allow me, once more, to know you outside of your work, beyond mere description ... beyond all words!

Yours, admiringly,
Salamor


p.s. Hints, is it? ... Very well, then...
Hint #1) I’ve been a guest in your mother’s home.

Laura Hohlwein said...

well that doesn't narrow things down too much.
how about hint #2?

salamor said...

Hint #2) I am a former student of hers.

Laura Hohlwein said...

uhhuh. and your name is...?