Friday, April 6, 2018

ah geez - already behind PAD 5 - crow

For today’s prompt, write an intelligence poem. Of course, intelligence is subjective. What is common sense for one person makes no sense to another. But intelligence is more than IQ and test scores. There’s artificial intelligence, intelligent animals, and military intel. And I’ve found that many poets have a special intelligence of their own.
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Castro Way

When the crow flew fast into our window
and then caught his flash-black wing in the snare of the privet bush
the street organized

One felt a criss-cross of them
- a Jacob's ladder -
a treetop mesh of crows
a scaffolding of response, locking down the area

Before we could try to help the bird
wing damaged - the beauty unsavable, probably,

another crow flew in hard and bumped him to the grass
and the broken bird tried
to fly and could 
for ten feet
before tipping sideways and flapping
desperately to right himself

and the grid above advanced ten feet
their calls - organized - intent
diagonally - sent and received and confirmed 

the bird tried to fly again
for another bit
and the community moved forward
in a flank and into position
two down near on each side of the street
hopping ahead with his advance
 - guards

we don't know if he made it
probably not 

If he did or he didn't
he was looked after

those that cared did all they could

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